The Dolphin

By Katie, Lucy and Hollie, 9, Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, UK

A little dolphin
Swimming in the deep blue sea
Far below the sky
(September 2003)

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The Eagle

By Sam, 9, Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, UK

The speeding eagle
flies fiercely down rocky cliffs
looping through the sky
(September 2003)

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The River Nile

By Jade, 9, Bexhill-on-Sea, East Sussex, UK

Rushing waters flow
Out of the river, seeds grow
The river is huge and great
(September 2003)

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The Horse

By Samantha and Cherry, 9, Bexhill-on-Sea, East Sussex, UK

Galloping horse
across the wet grassy field
Running home to me!
(September 2003)

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The Four Seasons

By Luke and Matthew, 9, Bexhill on Sea, East Sussex, UK

Strange little seed
growing into red flowers
Spring is beginning

Lost little leaves
playing against the flowers
hot summer is here

Little butterfly
floating over flowers
Summer is over

Delicate old sun
resting behind the snow
Autumn has ended
(September 2003)

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