The Cheetah

By Sian, 10

Fast darting cheetah,
Zooms through the scorching desert,
Chasing animals.

It has huge sharp claws.
It is orange with black spots.
Leaps through the jungle.

Lives in the desert.
The fastest land animal.
Killing predators.
(May 2006)

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Mixed Emotions In Africa

By Naomi, 10

Weak coconut milk,
Juicy avocados,
Grapes getting crushed.

Bright colourful clothes,
Bright colourful necklaces,
Brown and yellow beads.
(May 2006)

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Africa

By Matthew, 9

Brave fierce golden
powerful swiftly tiger
wild spotty cheetah.
(May 2006)

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Africa

By Craig, 11

Swiftly spying loud,
brave fast golden spotty lion
wild deadly cheetah

Rough hard elephants
hissing crawling fierce snake
jumping from tree to tree
(May 2006)

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Africa

By Simon, 11

Boiling sun biting,
flaming spicy sharp sunny
dry hot steam equator

Burning equator
scorching desert spicy hot
people sweating dry
(May 2006)

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Africa

By Jed, 9

Desert animals,
Rainforests in Africa,
animals in tribes.

Quads in Africa,
Madascar animals,
Off road rally.

Tribes of animals,
Landrovers in the desert,
Off road tracks and trees.
(May 2006)

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Africa

By Becky, 10

The boiling hot sun
The sun is blistering down
The sun is burning

The elephants play
The rhinoceros charges
The monkeys hang down

Bananas and nuts
They eat loats of vegetables
fish and coconuts.
(May 2006)

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