From Lancashire, UK, February 2011

Fire
By Tyler H, Year 2
The fire is in the park And is very dark. This fire in the park In the dark it's very hot and it is red. February 2011
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Fire
By Tilly, Year 2
Fire, fire is hot like a pot It's like a firework has dust set off It's very very dangerous don't go near it or it might give you a shock. February 2011
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Fire
By Sammy, Year 2/3
On Friday there was a house fire In my house, house With my mouse
The fire got higher and higher The house was full of smoke It had lots of flames
My mouse ran out the of house I ran with her We ran and ran February 2011
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Fire
By Sam, Year 2
The four firemen fought the fire Flickering flames fly from the fire February 2011
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Fire
By Saffa, Year 2
Fire, fire flickering flames Bursting into the sky Flicker flicker bing bong bang! Getting higher and higher All through the night.
Fireworks go BANG! All through the night Getting higher and higher into the sky Flicker flacker bing bong bang! Flames bursting into the sky Getting higher and higher. February 2011
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Fire
By Lucas, Year 2
Camp fire, camp fire Hope you light Camp fire, camp fire Glow in the night Camp fire, camp fire What a beautiful site Hope you grow, see You tonight
Camp fire, camp fire Hope you stay Camp fire, camp Hooray hooray
Camp fire, camp fire You are bright Camp fire, camp fire Day and night February 2011
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Fire
By Kieran, Year 2
Fire is HOT, hot ,hot, Lighting up the night I hope you stay lighting up So you can stay tonight I hope you stay I have more wood Just so you can stay February 2011
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Fire
By Megan, Year 2
There was a forest fire As small as a dot in a pot And as soon as it spread It goes out instead
Firework, firework in the sky Firework, firework in the sky Bank! Bang! Bang! They will scare you away. February 2011
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Fire
By Jamie, Year 2
House fires, house fires Are very hot House fires, house fires Are in a pot
It was bonfire night It gave me a fright The fireworks sparked and it was very dark fireworks, fireworks isn't it bright fireworks, fireworks I love you in the night February 2011
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Fire
By James, Year 2
Fire, fire, burning tyre Keep us warm in the night Fire, fire, hot, hot, hot! Burning like a northern light Camp fire camp fire burning hot like a northern light February 2011
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Fire
By Georgie, Year 2
Log fires are hot. Are very, very hot. Log fires do not go out You keep us warm a lot. February 2011
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Fire
By Jakub, Year 2
Camp fire, camp fire cook on hot Camp fire, camp fire burn a lot. February 2011
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Fire
By Jake, Year 2
Fire is hot Boiling water in the pot Fire is red Keeps you warm in bed! February 2011
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Camp fire
By Jacob, Year 2
In camp we had a camp fire and I cooked a fish over the camp fire And we ate it all up and after it was night time everyone said Goodnight and I went to sleep In camp we had a fire and it burnt a tyre and I saw a flier And the fire men burned down the flickering fire and we all said Hurray to the fire February 2011
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Fire
By Isobel, Year 2
Firework, firework boom in the sky Show your fire in the sky! Firework, firework don't go away Don't, don't I want you to stay! Firework light in the night! I like the night but I need some light! Thank you, thank you now I can see I can see in the very dark night! Firework thank you for the light Now it's lovely and shining bright! The night Is bright but I need some light in the very dark night! Oh calm down your frightening me with your BOOM! BANG! and SHINE! February 2011
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Fire
By Imogen, Year 2
The fire was hot and very dangerous Flickering orange flames are very hot and dangerous February 2011
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Fire
By Gabe, Year 2
Sitting round the camp fire Watching flames getting higher and higher Crackle, crackle big red sparks Disappearing in the dark In the morning just burning embers But what a fire did we remember February 2011
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Fire
By Frankie, Year 2
Fireworks, fireworks, I hope you stay I really love you night and day Fireworks, fireworks, I hope you fright Fire in to my height Fireworks I hope you love it Danger, danger, there's a fire in my house February 2011
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Fire
By Ethan, Year 2
Danger, danger, there is a forest fire But look there is something
look it's a helicopter It was red, yellow and blue It grew close to the fire February 2011
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Fireworks
By Emily, Year 2
Colourful fireworks Fireworks, fireworks go up in the sky With a bang! Bang! Colourful fireworks February 2011
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Fire
By Ellie J, Year 2
House fires are hot and dangerous House fires are very, very hot House fires are big House fires burn a lot
Fires, fires, burning bright Flickering flames all through the night Red, orange and yellow Make the colours of fire February 2011
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Forest fire
By Ellie C, Year 2
On Friday there was a flier About a forest fire And it started to spread Through the forest and flames Spreading everywhere It rose higher and higher And a house was full of flames Fire engines came to the forest They all ran away and everyone was scared Because it puffed out of the forest And into the city People were in bed They woke up and ran, ran, ran Some people ran so far they Stopped at a restaurant And had something to eat February 2011 More Fire Poems from Belthorn
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Log Fire
By Bob, Year 2
The fire is hot, fire is dangerous Flickering flames are very dangerous But one day in a house There was a mouse The log fire has logs in a fire And that is why it's called a log fire February 2011
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Fire
By Tyler, Year 2
The fire is burning bright it is like a sun It's bright flames are bright and orange and hot February 2011
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Firern
By Ben, Year 2
A racing fire it was very hot It burnt my toys I was very cross. A wiggling fire it was dancing in the wind The wood was burning on the mountain The snow was melting. February 2011
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