The Lost Island
By Elliott, 11

It was a sunny day and I was at the beach when it all happened. I was playing with my friends and I went to lie down, on my lilo, for two minutes. I didn’t notice this but my lilo started drifting out to sea. I don’t know how but the tide must have come in and I was only out there for about five minutes or so it seemed.

It was then that I realized that I was on an island. It was beautiful and it had trees that I didn’t know the name of. The sun was shining everywhere.

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