By Abbey, 9

"Hey sis, I'm going to my friend's house. I will be back soon. But first I am going to the shop."

I caught a bus to see my friend in Biringham. I had to catch the train back home.

Suddenly I found myself in the sea. I nearly drowned! A group of dolphins pulled me up and put me on a island.

 

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