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Why would he, how could he, did he really?

By Claire, 14

WHY WOULD HE, HOW COULD HE, DID HE REALLY?

I know that you have heard about all those other Science Fiction Stories you know the ones about all the aliens coming down and abducting humans and taking them away. Well this one is the total opposite.
John Weley a police detective for the New York Police Department, on a mission to find out where his partner was and why he was missing. He was only working one case at the time and the case wasn't that big so he had to rule out the possibility of his partner being kidnapped by the defendant. He also couldn't find out why everything in his apartment was gone. He knew that if his partner was moving then he would had told him. His mother had died 2 weeks before his disappearance but him and his mother were so distant and they never saw each other so he had to rule that fact out to.
If only there were evidence he thought, then he said to himself if there isn't anything left in his apartment and his car is still in his garage then how could he be gone and why would he leave, did he really leave on his own or was he taken by somebody and then being smart enough to leave no evidence besides his... wait a minute if is car is still here then there would have to be some kind of evidence left in there. So he went outside to the car and inside was a blanket with blood stains and a coffee cup half full. He knew that he could take the blanket down to the station and get it tested to see whose it is.
So that is what he did, but it turned out that it wasn't his blood on the blanket. He knew that his partner would never murder anyone. So all he could suspect was that his partner was set up and when his partner found out he could do nothing but get up and leave.
Then he remembered that before becoming a detective he wanted to have a career in astronomy but his greatest wish was to live in space with extra terrestrials but he knew that would never happen because he he didn't know any thing about flying and he was terrified of it.
Could he have though would he have, and Did he really?

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